gamuuut's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[MGS Meryl]

The face is a little squished, but the colors and lighting are super cool

[Aigis]

I love the way you shaded it! The linework on the hand is a little messy, but everything else is super clean.

[Whomp]

Great lighting and colors, especially on the feet and back. The angle of the face seems a little different than that of the body, but I love the expressiveness overall.

[goddamnit]

I really like the look you're going for, but some parts have a pretty significant lack of visual clarity (like the raised hand and coffee cup (took me a minute to decipher).
I think if you were to keep the space between the character and background al little cleaner, it would help communicate the form a lot better. I think the head hits that perfect balance of stylistically scribbly and visually clear. If that white gap were a little more present in the rest of the body, this would be great!

crobby responds:

yea there's definitely a ton of stuff in here that's too messy. I've been focusing on trying to maintain the messiness that i like to through in there while not trying to go too overboard lately so hopefully it'll improve. thank you for the feedback